La Chotos

submitted by Julie

Ok this is my story u may not believe it becauze i almost didnt ok so one night i was staying with my aunt corinas house and we were celebrating halloween.anywayz i was outside with my cousins ,Hosue,andrew,and laura,we were at first having fun playing ding dong ditch,but after a while we got bored so then we taunted our little cousins with scary stories about la chotos,legendry mexican flying creatures.these creatures are said to kill and fiest on human flesh on halloween.they are said that they have no face but just a mouth with super sharp teeth,and claws that show like knifes in the gleam of the moon.and the wings of a bat they live only in mexico(so yeah we were in mexico)pretty soon their parents were scowling at us for frighting them.Hosue was so bored he came up with this crazy idea he said "Lets go up on the roof"i wasnt sure i had this feeling something was gonna happin, something bad.but laura (whos my favorite cuzin )wanted to go so i decide to ignore the feeling and go too.after we climbed the tree that reached all the way up to the roof we jumped on the roof.Andrew and HOSUE started howling at the moon like wolfs,laughing and snorting over the people who passed who would all of a sudden burst into a run,while me and laura were talking and laughing .then all of a sudden we heard scraping sounds like someone else was on the roof we all turned to look but noone was there but the pitch night,so we all shrugged it off thinking it was nuthing .we went back to laughing and talking but we hear it again,this time me and laura stood up and looked at the dark nuthin was there but i couldnt help but feel like there was .i turned to laura and she had this scared expression on her face .i turned to hosue and andrew and said"maybe we should get down ,its creepy up here."laura agreed"yea i have a feelin were not here by ourselfs ,lets go,"Hosue busted out laughing but andrew didnt he looked scared and serious at the same time."come on hosue its not funny ,lets go man plz"andrew begged.we got distracted and didnt notice the scraping sounds coming closer to us .this screeching sound came from this outlined figure of a la choto.his jaw opened wide and i screamed .it screeched again it sounded like a cat hissing and spitting.we all ran 4 the tree but only two were able to climb down at a time and the roof was to tall to jump down from.andrew and hosue yelled 4 us to go down first and believe me we didnt hesitate.when me and laura got down we heard hosue scream and andrew fell off the roof landing on us .we got up and andrew was ready to climb back up.but we held him back he was screaming "la choto hes got him ! the la choto's got hosue!" laura ran inside to get help and while she was inside we heard one final scream from hosue then a thump on the roof.me and andrew climb up the tree and when we got up to the roof. Hosue layed there scratches all over his face, arms ,legs he was all most stripped 4rm all his clothes.he was unconcious when we ran to him .everytime we touched him there was blood on our hands,when laura and tio(uncle in spanish)lalo came up he still wasnt awake .my tio drove him to the hospital and my mom asked me wat happened i told her and she believed me because la chotos has got at least one member from our family every 4 years and it happened that hosue was in that family who got attached by the la choto's.after that me nd my cousin's never celebrated holloween again and hosue changed from a brave,handsome boy to a scared handsome unsteady boythats my story i know it may sound fake but it isnt i was there i saw it i know what happened.i know that the la choto's were there

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